Nothing that's important
Nothing that I'll tell
Just a few reminders
That things aren't always well.
Someone that I thought of
Someone that I loved
Just another memory that
It's never safe to trust
Let me wander freely,
Let me wonder more
Let me have the anger
For just a second more
I like this one, Am... it carries the weight of its message well, despite it's somewhat jaunty rhythm. Have you thought about ditching the rhymes and having a go at some free verse? It might be a way for you to really unleash your expression.
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